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x country day

GUESS WHAT!!! On Thursday when the sun was shining and the birds were chirping and there were no clouds  we had x country and it was so fun we did it at our school on the field. I was in the 10 year old girls who were pretty fast. At the finish line there was this great big thing that said FUN RUN on it and it was on our field where we finish our big race.

When we ran we went down our field then around the field out of the gate’s to the farm around the reserve and back into the gate. when we finished the race we got a glass of water where the office was and when I was at the finish line my brother was there and his name is lee he was saying “ GO! NIKKI GO!” and that made me happy.

When we finished the race and when we sat down the teachers said “Elizabeth came 1st ,Kevine came 2nd and  Ofa came 3rd. Sonner I went back to the teacher and I said “what did I come” and she said you came 5th and Shavana came 4th. I was so happy that I came 5th. we went back to class to rest...

... and we sat down on the picnic table to dry out the mud on our feet. After that when me and my friend (BFF) Keis were dry we went inside to play some games on our netbooks. But the cow where we keep some of our netbooks in was not open so I could not play on it so I went to my BFF Keis and we went on her netbook we played fireboy and watergirl on a site called cool maths games.

If you want to go to my BFF’s blog to see what she is up to here is a link to her blog... http://peskeisb.blogspot.co.nz/

      

 

Goldilocks and the three bears

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In a small cottage there lived three bear’s There lived a daddy bear, mummy bear and a baby bear.

And somewhere NOT at that cottage lived a girl named goldilocks with gold hair.

The three bears went out as a family and then the girl named goldilocks went inside the house.

She was up to mistrife in the house BUT the weird thing that happens is the the bad luck goes to the baby bear.

First she goes to a chair to sit down Then she went to eat some porridge that was in a bowl on the table then she fall asleep on the baby’s bed.

When she fell asleep in the babys bed she heard the tree bears coming up stairs so she did not know where to go she thought that best thing was to hide under the bed.

her legs were hanging out of the bed so the daddy bear grabbed onto her legs and chased her around the house.

THE MORAL OF THE STORY IS:Never sneak into other people’s house’s and break their stuff otherwise you have to pay the price.This can affect your life because you will go to jail or you will wish you never did that.

Little red ridding hood

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LITTLE RED RIDING HOOD

There once lived a little girl named little red ridding hood that lived with her mum. Something sad happened was that her grandma was very ill and had to stay in bed and was thinking if she was going to die or not. So her mum told her to give her some warm chicken noodle soup and some bread so she went through the woods. She was happy to see her grandma so she was skipping along with her basket.

Then this VICIOUS wolf came and tried to eat her BUT SHE DID NOT KNOW THAT HE WAS GOING TO EAT HER she carried on walking to her grandma’s house. So the wolf said where are you going  she said well I am going to my ill grandma to give her some food it is just down the hill there. After a few minutes little red was looking at some flowers and the wolf ran to the cottage where the grandma lived and through her in the cupboard and dressed up like the grandma.

Little red went to the cottage and she said Hi Grandma I have gotten some things for you and the grandma said oh Hello darling so red riding hood said”WOW you have big ears” the grandma said”all the better to hear you”red said”WOW you are hairy” grandma said all the better to keep me warm. The last thing red said was “OH MY GOSH LOOK AT YOUR RAZOR SHARP TEETH’ ALL THE BETTER TO EAT YOU!!!!!.

Then the real grandma came out of the cupboard and the woodcutter came inside and cut the wolf up and ate him for there big thank you and that there grandma was back to normal not ill .

The moral of the story: is never talk to strange people or strangers and it can affect your life because you might die and get eaten.

     THE END!!!!        

Retelling the story

                 GOLDILOCKS

                                                                                        and the three bears

In a small cottage there lived three bear’s There lived a daddy bear, mummy bear and a baby bear.

And somewhere NOT at that cottage lived a girl named goldilocks with gold hair.

The three bears went out as a family and then the girl named goldilocks went inside the house.

She was up to mistrife in the house BUT the weird thing that happens is the the bad luck goes to the baby bear.

First she goes to a chair to sit down Then she went to eat some porridge that was in a bowl on the table then she fall asleep on the baby’s bed.

When she fell asleep in the babys bed she heard the tree bears coming up stairs so she did not know where to go she thought that best thing was to hide under the bed.

her legs were hanging out of the bed so the daddy bear grabbed onto her legs and chased her around the house.

THE MORAL OF THE STORY IS:Never sneak into other people’s house’s and break their stuff otherwise you have to pay the price.This can affect your life because you will go to jail or you will wish you never did that.

THE BOY THAT CRIED WOLF!

Listen to Nikki as she retells the story.


Once upon a time there live happy people that lived in a village with a paddock over the hill where the sheep lived one day there was a shepherd that was looking after the sheep and the next week he got a bit bored so he was thinking of something to do. He waited a few minutes even a few hours for something exciting to do so he wished and wished for a wolf to play with.

So he wished for a wolf but nothing happened so he wanted to trick the people in the village. He ran past the paddock over the hill and went to the village and said”AHH A WOLF A WOLF WOOOOOOOOOOOOLF so they got pickaxes, knives, torches and other things that can kill the wolf. After that he said”HA HA I fooled you. They were mad and the blacksmith was even more angry

The next day when he woke up he was thinking of what he did yesterday when he fooled the villagers so he thought that he could do it again.He got out of bed and he thought that he can take it to the next level so he got red paint and put it on his arm to make it look like it is blood.Next he made his clothing ripped up and went to the village and said AHH A WOLF A WOLF WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLF they got scared and got things that will kill the wolf.The shepherd said “ha ha I fooled you guy’s again” so they got mad and they went back to their houses and the blacksmith said “not funny”

About three weeks later he got even more bored so he was wishing and wishing for something to occupy him so his job to look after the sheep was interesting.He was up to mishrif most of the time and that was fantastic for him but he got sick of it after a while. When he looked over the hill there was a wolf running so he ran to the village and screamed AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH THERE IS A WOLF CHASING ME AHHHHHHHHH. No one came out of there houses because they thought that he was lying.

The moral of the story: Never lie otherwise you will die or you will have to be running for the rest of you life.

The Wolf In Sheep's Clothing

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Once upon a time in a faraway land up on a hillside there live a shepherd with his sheep. The shepherd LOVED his sheep. On the other side of the hill lived a wolf with razor sharp teeth that was hungry for meat. He knew there were sheep on the other side of the hill. The shepherd REALLY cared about his sheep. He made sure they were warm and took the sheep to their barn and left them all alone at night.

​Well the wolf wondered where he could find clothing to make himself look like a sheep so he could get some meat. After searching for clothing he finally went to a big tree with snow on the branches and the leaves and he looked behind it and found a sheepskin. The wolf put it on and went to the sheep’s barn and joined them so he could get some DELICIOUS MEAT .

​A few minutes later when the shepherd left the barn the shepherd got a bit hungry so he walked back to the barn to the sheep so he could eat one of them. He picked the fattest sheep of them all and it was the WOLF. He killed it and took it home to his lovely wife to eat and they found out that it was not a sheep it was a wolf.

The moral of the story:Never pretend to something or someone you not