Wednesday, 20 February 2013

The bridge

Then bridge at omaru creek it moldy rust and old. The gross bridge is wooden too.Some of the nails stick out of the bridge so watch out. That bridge is goss color of green. There is water flowing under the bridge.On the floor of the bridge is square and it is plastic. I like the bridge because it is safe to walk on.    

Tuesday, 19 February 2013

The Amazing lake

TITLE:The amazing lake!!!


Purpose: To recount our experiences.
Audience: Readers of my blog, students and teachers at PES.

The lake has got a lot of rubbish in it and the water is green.The smell was revolting like B.O.It was not nice.We do not like going past it because it smells.The lakes very calm and there are no waves.There are heaps of branches in the lake.The lake is really deep so ducks can swim in it.The lake is murky too.The thing that I noticed is that the water has shadows of us in it and it reflects off the sun.On the bright side at least the ducks are having fun swimming away.

Is  My Writing Effective?
Are my paragraph/s about one MAIN idea?yes!
Do my paragraph/s have more than one sentence?  (usually 2-4)yes!
Are the sentences connected and build up the MAIN idea?yes!
Do my sentences in my paragraphs begin in different ways?yes!
Are the sentences varied?  e.g. in length, in complexityyes!
Have I used different types of sentences?   e.g Statements(.) Questions(?) Exclamations(!) OR Speech (“ “)No!
Have I carefully chosen words/vocabulary in my sentences?Yes!
Do my sentences and paragraphs meet the purpose?yes!
Do my sentences/paragraphs appeal to the reader/audience?

Monday, 18 February 2013

Better together

This movie was made by four special people.There names are Nikki Christian Mr Somerville and shiquara.The movie is about a bad person that was a bully but some thing cool happened the bully did something cool?

Thursday, 14 February 2013

Making a model of omaru creek

Yesterday morning we all went to our reading groups and we made a model of omaru creek.After that we got some paper and glue. I managed to Finnish it all.  

Tuesday, 12 February 2013

The Seed

Once upon a time in a faraway land live two tribes they were the Chafes and the Scarabs.Those two tribes did not like each other and there was a border that was in the middle of their tribes and they never crossed the border EVER!!!

Arter that something fell out of the sky and they did not know what it was.They studied it ,sketched it ,used science and other things.But the big thing that fell out of the sky was actually a cherry stone.BUT something happened both tribes wanted it so that was a bit of a mission for them.

sooner after that they said”this means war’’next they got their armour.their armour was nut shells for shield,cannons,spears ,catapults also shafts and tunnels

At last they were going to declare war but they realized that the stone was gone.It turned into a cherry tree it grew on both sides of the tribes and they lived in peace.

Friday, 8 February 2013

My first wekl at school

On the first day at school I was so terrified to even go to school that I was hiding away from my friends. Then we went to the hall for assembly and Mr Burt said Nikki is in room 16. After that we played some games outside with our teachers.

The games that we played were so so so so FANTASTIC!!! It was awesome when we played all of the games, well not all of them. We played five games they were called...

Try and Tag Mr Somerville with the ball. This is how you play the game. Well it is like dodge ball you can move around but the person with the ball  can not move.

The second game we play was with Mr Marks we are in a group with people. We had to get a band to hold on to and we could not let go. While we were holding on to the band we had to get the ball or the hula hoop.

We played a game with Miss Lavakula. It was called bodybuilders we had to make shapes, letters and other stuff. My group was Lesieli, Josiphine, christian anisha and me.

The last game I played was runners and catchers. How you play this game is easy.  There are people that go in a circle and pass the ball to each other. When the people are catching the ball the runners run to the other end of the cone.