Wednesday, 20 March 2013

Sleeping in a tent

When I went in the tent I felt the ground and the floor was lumpy and uneven but I knew that I would get used to it sooner or later. We had some stashes of lollies in a big red bag but it was a bit hard to eat because there were creepy shadows everywhere. In the middle of the night it got cold which was a problem because I had a sleeping bag that was not thick enough. Waking up early and I got out of the tent and the walls were dripping with condensation which was not nice.

1 comment:

Mr Chris Marks said...

Good job adding detail to your sentences Nikki. No you need to think about having a variety of sentence lengths in your writing. This means short, simple as well as detailed longer ones.

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