tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6257754745898060033.post682232143252742170..comments2015-11-19T05:31:46.646+13:00Comments on Nikki @ Pt England School: Sleeping in a tentPES 2012 Blogs Adminhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16237049368913248291noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6257754745898060033.post-68812162340044266302013-03-21T19:46:33.541+13:002013-03-21T19:46:33.541+13:00Good job adding detail to your sentences Nikki. No...Good job adding detail to your sentences Nikki. No you need to think about having a variety of sentence lengths in your writing. This means short, simple as well as detailed longer ones.Mr Chris Markshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14912841501575471267noreply@blogger.com