My edited version of plane crash

One morning at the airport there were 50 people going on a private  jet. They were very rich so they asked for the best pilot they have at that airport . The pilots name was Jess she was the best pilot.The boss of the whole airport was mark. The backup pilot was Kyle he was very jealous of Jess because he never got a trophy.

So Jess and the 50 people headed off to scotland in there fantastic jet. Sooner after they left they almost made it to scotland so the pilot pulled out the landing gear but it was stuck to the side the pilot was panicking so she hit the brakes. Shockingly the  jet started to drop and it crashed in the middle of nowhere.

Luckily the  50 people only has minor injuries and severe burns. Then they looked at the plane and it caught on fire. So they headed off to find some people for help. Then the 50 people all huddled up while the pilot went to find someone for help and one of them said “ I think that the pilot did it on purpose” “yeah” said the other person. After that the pilot came back and said “ sorry there is no one here we are going to have to find our own food and drinks. “And I heard you say  I crashed on purpose but I didn't” The people believed her and off they went.

The next day all of the people could smell pork because the pilot found a pig and killed it.

“Wakey- Wakey rise and shine” said the pilot here is some food for us. When they finished their food they went off to make there own clothes out of leaves and leopard skin and so forth.

The girls had  cheater skin as a top and flax as their skirts with flowers, on the other hand the the boys had pants made out of monkey fur and leopard skin as there tops.

The next morning when they woke up they heard a helicopter coming to rescue them so they climbed up  the ladder and went back to New Zealand to their family and Jess got fired.

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A Plane crash unedited vesion

One morning at the airport there were 50 people going on a private  jet. They were very rich so they asked for the best pilot they have at that airport . The pilots name was Jess she was the best pilot.

The boss of the whole airport was mark. The backup pilot was Kyle he was jealous of Jess.

So Jess and the 50 people headed off to scotland in there fantastic jet. Sooner after they left they almost made it to scotland so the pilot pulled out the landing gear but it was stuck to the side the pilot was panicking so she hit the brakes. Shockingly the  jet started to drop and it crashed in the middle of nowhere.

Luckily the  50 people only has minor injuries. Then the looked at the plane and it caught on fire. SO they headed off to find some people for help. Then the 50 people all huddled up while the pilot went to find someone for help and one of them said “ I think that the pilot did it on purpose” “yeah” said the other person. After that the pilot came back and said “ sorry there is no one here we are going to have to find our own food and drinks. “And I heard you say  I crashed on purpose but I didn't” The people believed her and off they went.

The next day all of the people could smell pork because the pilot found a pig and killed it.

“Wake y- Wake y rise and shine” said the pilot here is some food for us. When they finished their food they went off to make there own clothes out of leaves and cheater skin and so forth.

The girls had  cheater skin as a top and flax as their skirts with flowers, on the other hand the the boys had pants made out of monkey fur and leopard skin as there tops.

The next morning when they woke up they heard a helicopter coming to rescue them so they climbed up  the ladder and went back to New Zealand to their family and Jess got fired.

Lion for dinner

Every picture tells a story.

• Use your imagination and experience to narrate (tell) a story about the photo.
• Why are the people there?
• What are they doing?
• Why?
• What problem is caused?
• How is it solved?

• Think about: where your story is set
• Who your characters are – what they do, what they say, and how they think and feel the problem and how it is solved
• The order of your ideas and how they are linked.

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Problem The lion chases the man the wife dies The lion dies they are all hungry They are poor	Characters The lion an old man the mum Jackson(SON) Merry(DAUGHTER)
solution They are ritch they get to eat the lion dies they lived happy	setting A big farm it is winter `night time farm og hey huge

Once upon a time when it was freezing cold and the tree’s where icey there lived a poor family that had no home at all they lived in a hut they made. The Old Man’s name was Michael his wife’s name was Angel and they had two twins named Jackson and Merry. The kids were 6 years old. They all lived in bazuma!...

... Once when the old man named Michael  went off to get something to eat because it was time for dinner. It was an hour sins the old man Michael went to get dinner and that is because he had to hide from a !big!  lion it was hungry as well as them. The old man Michael  had to hide in the nearest bushes so the lion could not see him. Then He said “Hi lion come to papa” so the lion rushed to the man Michael.

After that the man Michael went to His hut and said “sorry my good family but dinner may take a while” and grabbed the butcher knife and said “bye bye” He did not know that there was a man named Chris was making a documentary of poor people. The lion found the man Michael  and ran to him then the old man Michael got the butcher knife and cut it up and said “wow! that was easier than it looked. The old man Michael picked the lion up and took it home for dinner.

3 hours after they finished eating there food the man Chris who was making the documentary came over and said “ wow! that was amazing how you cut that lion up I was making a documentary about poor people (No offence”) “It’s alright” said the wife of Michel. How would you like to be rich in a fancy house with all of the food you can eat and all of the space you can have and I will take you shopping for things?. “yes!!!” said the Family and went into limo.

TO BE CONTINUED...

    DUN DUN DUN...

My Narrative

One day there lived a chicken that gave birth to three chicks. One was called Jack another was called Sammy and the other one was called Jaime. They knew the had a stalker named Jingle bell it was a cat. They were arch enemies.

So one day the Mummy chicken took her chicks to carady lessons is was $2 which was 2 seeds a month. So the Mummy went to the spa to a deep body massage. Then the cat came along and said”well well oh isn't it the little mummy of those three chicks” “I am and I am proud of it” said the mummy chicken so she walk to the spa.

Three hours later the mummy chicken said “ Oh No I left my baby’s at carady lessons I am late” so she went off to the carady lessons and picked them up. “what did you learn there sad the mummy chicken” “ nothing much” said Jack.

Then the cat said “well well I think I am hungry” and ate one by one of the chicks and the mother was so sad that she stayed home forever crying and crying. She was thinking and thinking about what that day was like.

         THE END

Me and my brothers birthday

Hooray t is my birthday in 2 day's

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