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Friday, 19 October 2012

My Narative





One day mike and ally were engaged and they had a cool car.Mike was 26 and ally was 25 years old.They went into the shops to get a drink because that day was hot!!!


When they went out of the shops they were really mad because...
There was a man with a ski mask on and the person that was starting with the ski mask on had some wires.He got electrocuted for only 5 seconds.He was sweaty from that hard work.

After that the policeman came to the bakery for a donut for himself and for some other people.When the couple came out of the shops and sore that there car was gone because the man in the ski mask took it.Then the couple said to the police’’QUICK!!! there is a person that has our car’’and the police said’’what is the number plate’’and they said’’it is 1SE4N5’’

After that the police and Mike and Ally went to chase after that man that stole the car.Well Guess what there was a old man that was about 90 years old he was keeping the person that stole the car wait for long.Then the police caught up to the person that was stealing the car and the police took him to jail.

Then they had a big lunch of donuts and chicken wings.They had a big lunch because one of the police are retiring from being a police.The man that was going to retire he was 53 years old.Well 2 years later Mike and Ally got married and they found Ali's sister named Emily and she was 35 years old.’’OH MY GOSH’’!!! said Ally when she was in hospital pregnant with a baby ‘’it is a girl’’she said.Finally that family was happy and the baby’s name was linda!!!





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